Sunday, November 10, 2019

Book descriptions for The Phoenix and the Wolf

I'm working on a book description for my science fiction fantasy trilogy. I'm posting 2 rough draft versions of a description for book 1. Your opinions are  greatly appreciated!

#1

Expert assassin Phoenix Monroe always knew she was more than just a pretty face. Severely injured after surviving a suicide mission she’s rescued by colleague Lucas Kincaid, aka, the Wolf. Little does she know the dark, handsome stranger will be the catalyst for her change.  
The couple struggle to remain free as they are hunted by unknown forces. It’s revealed to Phoenix that she was part of a breeding experiment and the man who saved her is the father of her children.
Dying Phoenix is saved by a regenerative serum brought to her by her look-alike daughter who has developed the ability to escape her prison at will.
As a capture team enters, they realize she has betrayed them. Lucas dies in the attempt and Phoenix kills herself not knowing if she will be able to return.
She resurrects at the lab and uses her healing abilities to bring Lucas back. As the couple search for answers Lucas is told Phoenix is rumored to be an Area 51 experiment.
After they escape with their two oldest children, the family struggles to stay alive and free as they fight to save humanity from extinction.


#2

Expert assassin Phoenix Monroe severely injured on a suicide mission is rescued by retired colleague Lucas Kincaid, aka the Wolf. Little does she know the dark, handsome stranger would be her catalyst for change.
The couple struggle to remain free as they are hunted by unknown forces. Lucas reveals to Phoenix that she was part of a breeding experiment and that they are the parents of several children.
Dying, Phoenix is saved by a regenerative serum brought by her look-alike daughter who has developed the ability to escape her prison at will.
Trapped, unwilling to participate in whatever new plans they had for them the couple forms a suicide pact. As their enemies enter they realize they have betrayed by their daughter. After Lucas dies in the capture attempt; Phoenix kills herself.
Their bodies are taken to the lab where their children are held; Phoenix resurrects and uses the healing properties of her blood to bring Lucas back. While searching for answers to the nature of their existence, Lucas is told Phoenix is rumored to an Area 51 experiment.
The family fights to stay alive and free as they attempt to save humanity from the looming climate catastrophe. 
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#3
Expert assassin Phoenix Monroe severely injured on a suicide mission is rescued by retired colleague Lucas Kincaid, aka the Wolf. Little does she know the dark, handsome stranger would be her catalyst for change.
The couple struggle to remain free as they are hunted by unknown forces. Lucas reveals to Phoenix that she was part of a breeding experiment and that they are the parents of several children. Lucas  tells Phoenix she maybe a rumored Area 51 experiment. The family fights to stay alive and free as they attempt to save humanity from the looming climate catastrophe